User blog comment:Roacher26/The Boy and the Herdsman/@comment-5059850-20120504202438

Wow!!! This is really good! I love your plot writing skills too! On your issue with Nick: maybe Nick could have already been investigating Brook Gage and from a slew of disappearances, much like in "Organ Grinder." Also, when Taurean explains about his friendship with Brook Gage, who is he talking to? If Nick, then wouldn't he and Nick already know eachother's identity from the conversation? I ask this because you say that Taurean says, "Grimm," as the last line. Overall, great! I look forward to reading your other episode information!