Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-5914541-20131019153409/@comment-4273152-20140118221604

I googled "avenge family", this guy popped up and I though it worked well. I didn't realise the mistakes I made until after I posted i,I was going mainly on memory, I didn't think to re-read the post. Sorrt I screwed it up, but it does kind of fit well I think. Besides that,it is from one point of veiw, soit's not impossible toassume the soldier didn't know the vemon was a paralytic agent and assumed the Corporal deaad, while the Rache Jeagar had the satisfacting of knowing the guy was dying slowly from the bullet-wound.

Apart from that, is it ok? I may do more if you or anyone wants me to, start up a sister topic for the diary entries.