Thread:PDXBlazer/@comment-5563538-20131215095234/@comment-5563538-20131215184426

Ah, I get the linking part, I used to just let others do it but I suppose now is a good time to start. Did I spell someone's name wrong though? I usually either take them from the subs of the episode or the character's wikia page.

The hyphen is a valid punctuation, used to connect two independent clauses that relate to each other, but I'll keep in mind not to use too much of it.

Although, if I may add, you're adding a bit to much detail:

" He uses his flashlight to look around and communicates with his co-workers above ground by radio. Jimmy says that it's pretty dry where he is and there is no sign of a blockage, so it must be close to the main junction. Jimmy finds the blockage and tells Charlie that there is a pretty big branch, so he needs a chainsaw to break it up."

Could be shortened a lot, into: "He finds a blockage in the sewers and calls for his partner to send a chainsaw down before hearing something ahead" which fits the spoiler policy a lot more. As for the HTML, it's probably because I'd written it on a Google Document before pasting it into the wiki, I won't do that again.

Whoops, sorry for the long message. Anyway, I'll work on 3x08 TDoK right now, do feel free to edit it, but please try not to entirely remove it and rephrase it; I don't believe my sypnosises are that awful? Thanks!