Thread:Grimmaniac/@comment-3125844-20151030220003/@comment-33188476-20160110000610

Do you think brackets or parentheses look better for actions in transcripts, or do you think they're about the same?

Ex:

[Adalind's daughter coos in Renard's arms]

Adalind: [Looking through Renard's fridge] I'm starving. I haven't eaten since this morning. To tell you the truth, I haven't eaten well in about a month... unless you count rabbit on a stick.

Renard: How was the birth? Was it difficult?

Adalind: You mean besides the "I thought I was gonna explode and die" part? What do you think?

Renard: I wish I could have been there.

Adalind: Stop reminiscing about what you didn't do. You need to start thinking about what you're gonna do now.

[The baby coos as Renard hands her to Adalind]

vs.

(Adalind's daughter coos in Renard's arms)

Adalind: (Looking through Renard's fridge) I'm starving. I haven't eaten since this morning. To tell you the truth, I haven't eaten well in about a month... unless you count rabbit on a stick.

Renard: How was the birth? Was it difficult?

Adalind: You mean besides the "I thought I was gonna explode and die" part? What do you think?

Renard: I wish I could have been there.

Adalind: Stop reminiscing about what you didn't do. You need to start thinking about what you're gonna do now.

(The baby coos as Renard hands her to Adalind)