Thread:Harbinger3781/@comment-5563538-20131217222715/@comment-5563538-20131220014358

Holy crap, you've put a LOT of thought into this, haven't you?

Okay but firstly, sorry. It was 1am and I was emotional and I ramble lots when it's late; you probably can tell. What few friends I have are aware of this pretty bad habit, and humour me usually.

I don't mind sharing things with you, I trust you and really, what harm can come out of confiding in someone across the planet? Unless you were lying about your location, and even then you could harm me. It won't happen again, though, I'll try and keep my rambling on a leash from now on. ^^;;

Architect is a perfect name (or the something he's called) for your character, I think. I love the idea, though, of some dark divine being making world prototypes in the background. Sheds a new light on a lot of things, given that we (the humans) really don't know much about anything in this universe. This sounds a little like the Doctor from Doctor Who, an powerful being blessed (cursed) with immortality. But also very different.

Just one thing, though. Again, with the Nick/Grimm/immortality argument. If Architect is completely perfect and god-like, what's the point? He could do anything without a struggle, everything would go his way. He could save his children with the snap of his fingers, it sounds like, he could wake up from his coma in seconds.

He'd never be troubled by anything, or hurt, or scared, and then there wouldn't be much to write about, I think.

I don't see why you can't turn this into a book, though, as long as you changed the copy-righted names (like Stuart). Because it goes against religious beliefs? Almost all sci-fi books do; that's the point of the civil liberty: freedom of religion.

With this level of development and creativity, I see no problem with you being an "official" writer.

I thought I'd scared you away for a moment, and I really am sorry for dumping all that crap onto you at once. ^^; I hope it hasn't weirded you out too much.

By the way, do you have a Skype or something? Or some other communication platform? I know skype's not all that popular in China, but it'd be a heck lot more convenient and private than the wikia.